1dering at stars

So, take me to that place Where the grass is green as youth And the rhythm of a seashell, is perfect as a breath Where the river sings as freely, ...

Oh if the world were just a dream, Would you be happy when you woke? And if your life were just the same, What would you do when you found ...

Hi everyone. This is different than anything I've really written before, and I know that the lines seem to break in unusual places, but they're meant to. Critiques are greatly ...

And then, the world ended. The stars fell down like tear drops, and I caught them in my palms as they trickled to the earth. And I fell right through ...

I'm not sure if the rhythm really works with this... anywho... help? And if you can believe then I will show you how to use it, and if you do ...